Assignment: Section A :Planning A Trip


Your class has just carried out a discussion  to go for a trip, Kota Bharu next month.  Your form teacher and Sejarah  teacher will be accompanying your class. Write a  journal based on the short notes you have made.

9 February 2011 (Friday)

– all pupils assembling  at school gate

– queue and board school bus

– will be leaving at 8.00 a.m

–  having meals at Merang Beach

– continuing journey

– reaching Kota Bharu at about 11.30 a.m.

– stop at  Masjid Muhammadi at Kubang Kerian,  for Friday Prayer,

– visiting central market, Pasar Besar Siti Khadijah,

– visit fishing village at Tumpat

– also visit batik factory at Pangkalan Chepa

– heading back home

When writing your journal:

  • You may add any relevant points to make your journal interesting.
  • Elaborate on the given notes to make it more interesting.
  • Add any relevant information
  • Make sure it is not less than 120 words.

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25 thoughts on “Assignment: Section A :Planning A Trip

  1. My class has decided to go for a one day trip to Kota Bharu next month. We will be visiting many places of interest there.

    First, all pupils will be assembling themselves at the school gate at about 9.30 a.m on Friday, 9th October 2010. Then, they queue and board the school bus because we will be leaving at 10.00 a.m.

    After that, we stop at Pantai Merang to do the Friday prayer. We will be having lunch at a nearby stall and continue our journey. We will be reaching Kota Bharu at about 3.30 p.m.

    Then, we will visit the central market, Pasar Siti Khadijah, fishing village at Tumpat, batik factory. We will buy something at Pasar Siti Khadijah.

    After all the fun that we have, we will be heading home at about 6.00 p.m. I hope this trip to Kota Bharu will a fun, enjoyable and unforgettable journey.

    1. Good effort and you have fulfilled the task requirement. Add relevant details to make your writing more interesting

  2. PLANNING A TRIP TO KOTA BAHRU

    My class, form 1 Gemilang will organise a one day tour to Kota Bahru, next month. We will be leaving for Kota Bahru on the 9th October 2010, Friday morning.

    Firstly, all pupils will be assembling them selves at the school gate at about 9.00 a.m, on Friday 9th October 2010.

    Then, they all will queue and board school bus because they will be leaving at 10.00 a.m. After that, we will stop at a Pantai Merang Mosque to Friday prayer, we will be having lunch and continuing our journey.

    We will be reaching Kota Bahru at about 3.30 p.m, Then, we will visiting the central market, Pasar Siti Khatijah, Fishing village at Tumpat, After that, we will go to Batik Factory, Before that, we will buy something at Pasar Siti Khatijah.

    Lastly, we will be heading back home and feel very happy, we will want to go there again if we have more time. Kota Bahru is a very beautiful place for visiting

  3. PLANNING A TRIP TO KOTA BHARU..

    My class, form 1 Gemilang will organize a one day tour to Kota Bharu next month. We will be leaving for Kota Bharu on the 9th October 2010,Friday morning.
    Firstly, all pupils will be assembly at school gate at about 9.00a.m. Then, they will queue and board school bus. We will be leaving at 10.00a.m.
    After a few hours we reach at Pantai Merang, we will be stop mosque nearby for Friday prayer and having lunch. After that we will continue our journey.
    At 4.00p.m. we reach at Kota Bharu. We will go to Pasar Siti Khadijah and see what are the special there. Then we will go to fishing village at Tumpat. Finally we will visit batik factory to learn how to make batik.
    After for all, we will heading home with new experience. I hope this plan will be success.

  4. PLANNING A TRIP TO KOTA BHARU

    My class has decided to go for a one day Trip to Kota Bharu next month. We will be visiting many place of interest there.

    Firstly, all pupils will be assembling themselves at the school gate at about 9.30 am. on Friday 9 October 2010.Approximately 10 minutes, the bus arrived at school. We just paid RM20 to ticket bus. Then we queue and board school bus because we will be leaving at 10.00am.

    After a few hours, we stop at a mosque near Pantai Merang to Friday prayer. Pantai Merang is very beautiful. We will also having lunch. After that we continuing journey.

    At 3.30pm, we reaching at Kota Bharu. We visiting central market. We also shopping at there. After that, we going to Pasar Siti Khadijah. Kelantanse women are very hardworking, industrial to state’s economy. Then, we going fishing village at Tumpat. We also can see the fishermen unloaded their catch. And the last trip we going to Batik factory. Batik is very popular at Kelantan and very beautiful. We also learning how to make the Batik.

    Finally, we heading back home. We also tired but we very enjoyable. A trip to Kota Bharu are very fun for ours.

    1. Task fullfilled but there are some grammatical errors in the last paragraph.
      a. Repititions of “going”
      1. We will be going …

      2. The trip to Kota Bharu will be very fun for us.

      Evaluation: (18/30 marks)

  5. PLANNING A TRIP TO KOTA BHARU

    My class, form 1 Gemilang will organise a day tour to Kota Bharu, next month. We will be leaving for Kota Bharu on the 9th October 2010,Friday morning. We will visiting many places of interest places.

    Firstly, all pupils assembling themselves at the school gate. We will leaving the school at 10.00 a.m. We will going there by bus. We will queue up and board the school bus.

    After that, we will stop at the mosque for Friday’s prayer near Pantai Merang. After prayer, we will having lunch and we will continuing our journey.

    We will be reaching at Kota Bharu approximately 3.30 p.m. We will be visiting central market, Pasar Siti Khadijah.We also can buy something. We will be going to Fishing village at Tumpat and batik factory. Kelantanese women are very hardworking industrical to state’s economy. Lastly , we will be leading back home.

    1. Good effort but you have left out the verb “be” examples :
      1. We will be visiting many places of interest.
      2. We will be having lunch and will continue our journey.

      Keep it the good effort. ( 24/30 marks)

  6. PLANNING A TRIP TO KOTA BHARU-
    My class has decided to go for a one-day trip to Kota Bharu next month. We will be visiting many places of interest there.
    Firstly,all pupils will be assembling themselves at the school gate at the 9.30 am.On Friday,9 October 2010, they will queue and board school bus. After 10.00 am, we will leaving to Kota Bharu.
    After a few hours, we reach and stop at a mosque near Pantai Marang. All the boy have Friday prayer. Next,we having lunch and will continuing journey.
    After that, we reaching Kota Bharu at 3.30 pm. We stop at “Pasar Siti Khadijah”. Secondly, we visiting central market. And than, we go to fishing village at Tumpat. Next, we go to batik factory and see how to make batik.
    After, for all we heading back home. I hope I can have a trip to Kota Bharu again.

    1. Task fulfilled but there are some minor errors in the grammar. The sentences will be better if you use “will” or “will be + ing”
      After a few hours, we will reach and will stop at a mosque near Pantai Merang.
      All the boys, will be having a Friday prayer.

      Check through again and look for other errors. Happy blogging.

  7. PLANNING A TRIP TO KOTA BHARU..

    My class, form 1 Gemilang will organize a one day tour to Kota Bharu next month. We will be leaving for Kota Bharu on the 9th October 2010,Friday morning.
    Firstly, all pupils will be assembly at school gate at about 9.00a.m. Then, they will queue and board school bus. We will be leaving at 10.00a.m.
    After a few hours we reach at Pantai Merang, we will be stop mosque nearby for Friday prayer and having lunch. After that we will continue our journey.
    At 4.00p.m. we reach at Kota Bharu. We will go to Pasar Siti Khadijah and see what are the special there. Then we will go to fishing village at Tumpat. Finally we will visit batik factory to learn how to make batik.
    After for all, we will heading home with new experience. I hope this plan will be success.

  8. pLaNiNg A tRiP t0 kOtA baharu

    My class,form 1 Gemilang will organise a one day tour to Kota Baharu, next month.We will leaving for Kota Baharu on 10 a.m.9th october 2010,Friday morning. Firstly,all the pupils assembly in front of the school gate. There were 45 pupils and 6 teachers coming along. The bus arrive on 9.30 a.m. They will queue and board school bus. We will be leaving at 10 a.m.

    After a few hours, we will be arrive at Pantai Merang at 1.00 p.m. We will stop at a mosque to Friday prayer. The girl will take rest for 30 minutes. After the Friday prayer, we will continue our journey at 3.30 p.m. Then,we will arrive at Kota Bharu at 4.30 p.m.

    After that, we will be visit Pasar Siti Khadijah to buy keychain as souniver when we back home. We also visit Batik’s factory near the Pasar Siti Khadijah. The Batik’s factory supervisors will be giving us brefing about how batik is maded.It will be a great help to learn how to process tradisional and modern painting.

    Finally, we will heading back home at about 6.30 p.m. It will be an interesting and having a new experience. I hope this trip to Kota Bharu will be a fun and enjoyable journey.

  9. My class ,from 1 gemilang will organize a one day tour to Kota Bharu on the 9th October 2010,Friday morning.
    Firstly,all pupils will be assembling themselves at the school gate at about 8.30a.m on the 9th October 2010,Friday morning. We will go by school bus. We will be leaving at 10.00am. They queue and board school bus.
    After 2 hours ,we will stop at mosque near pantai Merang to Friday prayer. After Friday prayer, we will be having launch and continue journey and reach at Kota Bharu at about 3.30p.m.
    At Kota Bharu .we will be visiting central market, Pasar Siti Khadijah. We can buy something at there. We also go to fishing village at Tumpat and batik factory.
    Kelantanese women are very hardworking industrical to state’ economy. We also can buying many type of batik from factory. We will be leading back home. I think pupils will happy and enjoy the trip

  10. My classs,form 1 gemilang wiil organize a one day tour to kota bharu, next month. We will leaving for kota bharu on 10.00a.m 9 October 2010, Friday morning.
    Firstly, all pupils assembly in front of the school gate. There will be 35 pupils and 5 teacher coming along. The bus arrive at on 9.30 a.m . we will be leaving at 10.00 a.m
    Then we arrive at pantai merang on 1.00p.m to do Friday prayer we will take rest for 30 minutes. We will continue our journey untiol 2.30p.m.
    After, that we will vist pasar siti khadijah, fishing village at tumpat and batik factory.
    Lastly, we will back to school and we will do a scarp book about kota bharu

  11. My class, form 1 Gemilang will organise a one day tour to Kota Bharu, next month. We will be leaving for Kota Bharu on the 9th October 2010, Friday morning.

    Firstly, all pupils will be assembling them selves at the school gate at about 9.00a.m on Friday 9th October 2010.

    Then, they all queue and board school bus because they will be leaving at 10.00a.m. After that, we stop at a Pantai Marang, mosque to Friday prayer, we will be having lunch and continuing journey.

    We will be reaching Kota Bharu at about 3.30p.m. Then we will be visiting the central market, Pasar Siti Khatijah, fishing village at Tumpat, batik factory. We buy some thing at Pasar Siti Khatijah.

    Lastly, we will be heading back home and feel very happy, we want to go there again. Kota Bharu is a very beautiful place.

    1. Good effort both of you. Please add some more elaboration. What will you do at the Pasar Siti Khadijah, the fishing village at Tumpat?

  12. My classs,form 1 gemilang wiil organize a one day tour to kota bharu, next month. We will leaving for kota bharu on 10.00a.m 9 October 2010, Friday morning.
    Firstly, all pupils assembly in front of the school gate. There will be 35 pupils and 5 teacher coming along. The bus arrive at on 9.30 a.m . we will be leaving at 10.00 a.m
    Then we arrive at pantai merang on 1.00p.m to do Friday prayer we will take rest for 30 minutes. We will continue our journey untiol 2.30p.m.
    After, that we will vist pasar siti khadijah, fishing village at tumpat and batik factory.
    Lastly, we will back to school and we will do a scarp book about kota bharu

  13. Planning A Trip To Kota Bharu……

    My class has decided to go for a one day trip to Kota Baharu next month.We will be visiting many places of interest there.

    Firstly,all pupils will be assembling themselves at the school gets at about 9.30a.m on friday , 9 Octobers 2010.Approntimately 10 minutes,the bus arrived at school.We just paid RM20 to ticket bus.Then,we queue and board school bus because we will be leaving at 10.00a.m.

    After a few hours, we stop at a mosque near Pantai Merang to Friday prayer.Pantai Merang is very beautiful.We also having a lunchs.After that we continuing journey.

    At 3.30p.m,we reaching at Kota Bharu.We visiting Central Market.We also shopping at there.After that,we going to Pasar Siti Khadijah.Kelantanse women are very hardworking,industrial to state’s economy.Then,we going to fishing village at tumpat.We also can see the fishermen unloaded their catch,and the last trip we going to batik factory.Batik is very popular at Kelantan and very beautiful.We also learning how to make the batik.

    Finally,we heading back home.We also tired but enjoyable.A trip to Kota Bharu are very fun for ours……

  14. Planning A Trip To Kota Bharu……

    My class has decided to go for a one day trip to Kota Baharu next month.We will be visiting many places of interest there.

    Firstly,all pupils will be assembling themselves at the school gets at about 9.30a.m on friday , 9 Octobers 2010.Approntimately 10 minutes,the bus arrived at school.We just paid RM20 to ticket bus.Then,we queue and board school bus because we will be leaving at 10.00a.m.

    After a few hours, we stop at a mosque near Pantai Merang to Friday prayer.Pantai Merang is very beautiful.We also having a lunchs.After that we continuing journey.

    At 3.30p.m,we reaching at Kota Bharu.We visiting Central Market.We also shopping at there.After that,we going to Pasar Siti Khadijah.Kelantanse women are very hardworking,industrial to state’s economy.Then,we going to fishing village at tumpat.We also can see the fishermen unloaded their catch,and the last trip we going to batik factory.Batik is very popular at Kelantan and very beautiful.We also learning how to make the batik.

    Finally,we heading back home.We also tired but enjoyable.A trip to Kota Bharu are very fun for ours……

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